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Miss Bubble
Indeed, it's a very odd name
I act vaguely happy
But it's not quite the same
I was given that name at birth they say
So it can't be helped, that title must stay

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Miss Bubble
I'm Bubble by name, bubbly by nature
Lovely and colourful, amusing and innocent
Yet airy and transparent, lacking substance and stature
"Miss Bubble, how the world loves you so.
You're wonderful with your ethereal glow."

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Miss Bubble
Who am I today?
Too tired to pretend anymore
Just soapy water that is grey
It all fell to pieces when my bubble world popped
And now life's a fairy floss machine with an engine that has stopped.
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err... um... happiness?

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:iconferengcheng:
The last line seems a little long...but you certainly captured to change in tone very well.

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Avatar by: ~iris-rocks
:iconnaughtysorceress:
yeah... that's what i thought too... but i couldn't think of a way to shorten it effectively
:iconbloodecstasy:
I love the rythm. :)

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I was at my worst, When I had everything I ever wanted.
:iconlaz007:
It sounds airy

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With time and patience the mulberry leaf becomes a silk gown :meditate:
:iconnaughtysorceress:
does it? is it too depressing, or do you think it's cliched?

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